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Re: Ashurbanipal chapter 2 part 1 (written by Amniel)
yeth mahstha
Mar 11, 2009 -
Re: Ashurbanipal
I. Aram-ashur II. Assyria, turkey, egypt, babylonia...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: What is ou purpose?
ah, I may have to explain that... Rules = laws and morals
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: The mansion chapter 7 part 2 out of 2
I just want to make something clear with this post. Melody doesn't get pinned down. she is the one who pulls Jack into the hole.
Jan 29, 2009 -
Re: Ashurbanipal-chapter 1 - part 1
Okay Thanks for the review. I'll just explain these things. I will express Aram's thoughts but I didn't think I needed to do that in this part of the story. ...
Jan 16, 2009 -
Re: Disenchanted
If oceans were not infinitely deep And horizons just a figment of my eye. If art was not born of the soul, The human race just a minute in time. ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Prologue
Thanks for the reviews everyone, they will help me. And about the cliches. :D I wrote them on purpose. I wanted to write a story that will make the reader ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: Exile: Chapter 1
It has nine books... Oh mi God. Well anyways I'm back and I am going to review it again (as you told me that you had edited it. :P ) ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 1
Let us take this conversation into PMs
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 1
Otto? Is thaat you?? Thanks for the review anyways. :D
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: One to believe in
Once again, no, they don't all have one. In fact, I know a few who don't. Stik a gun up their nose and I promise that they will be praying ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Judgement Day: Prologue
What is said above is something important. But the second person and "I" gives the story it's own flavor. and it is also Overlords: plural (isn't it?) Deus es machina, ...
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: Judgement Day: Prologue
Oh you noticed. We change a lot of ideas. :D Now funny it is, descriptive it is not. EDIT IT!!
Nov 5, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chapter 1
Thanks I'll get editing.
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: The Mansion chaptr 6 part 2
Thanks. :D
Nov 1, 2008
